Poetry Break: One-Liner Foreseen
What did Tennessee? She saw what Arkansas:
If you stare long enough at the saw, a forbidding word appears . . .That Trusty Old SawAs the old saw says, "Old saws sever rust."
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If you stare long enough at the saw, a forbidding word appears . . .That Trusty Old SawAs the old saw says, "Old saws sever rust."
Labels: Holy Wisdom
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"If you stare long enough..."
For what it's worth, I see the "Colourbox" watermark. If I tilt my head to the right while staring at the rusty saw, I can see a stretched-out letter "D," sort of. If I stare at the old saw made of prose, my mind changes "sever" to the forbidding "never," and that's about all I can see while staring long. I think I didn't stare long enough.
I meant that the watermark itself, which is hard to make out on my screen, is perhaps intended to imply that one shouldn't use this image. I apologize for my misleading manner of expression.
But I did want "sever" to switch from "sever" to "ever," back and forth in one's reading.
Jeffery Hodges
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Nothing to apologize for! Academics often have a charmingly oblique sense of humor; it's in their nature, and it's up to the reader to do the work of unpacking meaning.
As for "Old saws sever rust" versus "Old saws ever rust"... yes, the phonetic sleight of hand works as long as the reader doesn't notice the sly transition from "s" to "z" in the sibilant connecting "saws" and "(s)ever." It's similar to the French punning between "ils sont" and "ils ont."
Well, I always appreciate your sense of humor - even your Irish jokes, you anti-Irish friend-of-a-ligament who would probably enjoy puerile humor like "The Bastard from the Bush"!
Jeffery Hodges
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Amazing poem. I read it aloud to myself in an Oyrish accent... then saw the comment that the poem was "true blue Aussie" in spirit. Guess I'll have to change accents and reread da bloody thing.
Well Kevin so long as you're rereading anyway ... gaze closely at that watermark.
It's sagu!
JK
Kevin, you'll likely also like this one: Hell's Bells.
Jeffery Hodges
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