Poetry Break: Another Disturbing One-Liner
Here it is:
Another HorseIf wishes were horses, we'd wish they weren't.
With the possible exception of Mr. Ed.
UPDATE: Is the following better?
Another HorseIf wishes were horses, we'd wish they were not.
This sounds better to my ear, but it has eleven syllables, not ten, and I'm aiming for iambic pentameter.
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