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Wednesday, November 24, 2021

Practice is Imperfect

Cryptic  Poetic

On my way through a thicket,
I was given a ticket
for driving way much too slow,
so I floored to the board go,
went gone my reward, for fast
was light-speed beyond pace past.

This 'poem' still needs a lot of work just to achieve mediocrity.
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4 comments:

  1. Kevin Kim10:40 PM

    It's cryptic, but mainly because I'm trying to unravel the meter.

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  2. Horace Jeffery Hodges11:39 PM

    So am I.

    Jeffery Hodges

    * * *

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  3. Carter Kaplan4:55 AM

    "How Mediocrity Works"

    by

    Stanley Fish

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  4. Horace Jeffery Hodges1:26 PM

    Some reworking . . .

    Cryptic Poetic

    On my way home through thicket,
    I was given a ticket
    for driving way much too slow,
    so I floored to the board go,
    went gone too fast at long last
    at light-speeds beyond pace past.

    Getting There? There's a Chance you'll make it if we tend to our garden . . .

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