Wednesday, November 24, 2021

Practice is Imperfect

Cryptic  Poetic

On my way through a thicket,
I was given a ticket
for driving way much too slow,
so I floored to the board go,
went gone my reward, for fast
was light-speed beyond pace past.

This 'poem' still needs a lot of work just to achieve mediocrity.

4 Comments:

At 10:40 PM, Blogger Kevin Kim said...

It's cryptic, but mainly because I'm trying to unravel the meter.

 
At 11:39 PM, Blogger Horace Jeffery Hodges said...

So am I.

Jeffery Hodges

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At 4:55 AM, Blogger Carter Kaplan said...

"How Mediocrity Works"

by

Stanley Fish

 
At 1:26 PM, Blogger Horace Jeffery Hodges said...

Some reworking . . .

Cryptic Poetic

On my way home through thicket,
I was given a ticket
for driving way much too slow,
so I floored to the board go,
went gone too fast at long last
at light-speeds beyond pace past.

Getting There? There's a Chance you'll make it if we tend to our garden . . .

 

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