Good Advice, Taken Aback
Don't ever talk 'bout folks behind their backs;Taken Aback
They'll hear, and likely spot you right away!
Instead stand d'rectly there before their backs;
They'll hear, but not quite catch your words, you say?
UPDATE: Yeah, I know it's a dreadful poem . . .
Labels: Dark Humor, Poetry
2 Comments:
Well, it's got an abab rhyme scheme, and it's in iambic pentameter. You're on your way to a Shakespearean sonnet! (About 2/7 of the way, I believe...)
Moreover, it offers good advice, unconventionally expressed!
God, but it's a great poem!
Jeffery Hodges
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