Poetry Break: "This Warmth I Feel"
Nothing came of that other than this poem.
For which ... I am immensely grateful. Otherwise, I might not have met my good-lovin' Sun-Ae (선애), who provides plenty of warmth and brilliance.
This Warmth I FeelSounds enticing, doesn't it, but fire burns, even to ashes, as this other poem warns ... or also entices?
This smoldering passion that you bear,
Though hidden by your verbal grace,
Erupts by virtue of your hair,
Whose flames offset your sculpted face.
This warmth I feel beneath your skin
With every pulse originates
In racing fires that burn within,
And soft suggests your inner traits.The chill night air has shivered me.. . .
This cold, damp fog has swirled around
And in its vortex circled free
By stealth to steal what warmth it's found
That yet remains within my limbs.
My breath engages with the mist --
Ensnared, it's merged into that film,
Which heavy, finds itself condensed
To cool still more what heat has stayed.
I'm closer drawn to warm my bones
Beside the fires you generate,
Much better than to rub alone
My palms, or arms, against the cold.
Draw closer then, dispel this chill,
Lean close yourself within my fold
To share with me the warmth you feel—
You'll feel that I can smolder too,
Through passion radiate desire,
And shine with brilliance just for you,
Engendered by your burning fire.
Labels: Dante Gabriel Rossetti, Poetry
4 Comments:
Nice lines, Jeffery. I might wonder, though, if they were initially inspired, at least in part, by Tonya Bassham and the bus stop and that purple cow...
Only to the extent that the Purple Cow poem awakened my early interest in poetry.
I've been ruminating on the stuff ever since...
Jeffery Hodges
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P.S. Stewdog will hate the lack of a perfect rhyme scheme, but I can just blame that on my imperfect digestion.
Or ... is it you, Wonderdog, who's so strict about rhyme scheme?
It's these damned dog days of summer -- I can't keep anything straight.
Jeffery Hodges
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