Friday, October 30, 2020

A Dumb Adumbrated Limerick

I'm still working, trying to make this limerick better:


I suffer from orangu-tongue
and speak to neither old nor young.
I sign forth what I want to mean
and keep my meaning very clean.
But would word come from either lung.

This is altered, but still needs work, mostly that final line.


At 5:07 AM, Blogger Carter Kaplan said...

There are so many good ideas here that I should encourage you to drop the constraints of the limerick and set forth (and write down) all the pathways and passages that are opening.

At 7:21 AM, Blogger Horace Jeffery Hodges said...

That's an idea, but I may have finished. Saturday's is up.

Jeffery Hodges

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